Open Poetry #38 |
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From the Soddy Journal - 1886 - The Long Heat |
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Sunshine
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From the Soddy Journal – 1886 – The Long Heat Soon, you will come in, dust streaked, sweaty, tired and hungry, for the meal that will be simple ~ fried chicken, baked yam, fresh bread, and from last year, when weather was good, a jar of canned sweet peaches, if only for the liquid syrup that will sweeten this harsh day. My lips go to your neck, to say a private hello, your dusty salt taste and pumping veins telling me you spent moments too long walking out your frustrations. I know it has been too long, since April, or was it the first of May? when rain last fell. Then, too quickly, temperatures grew, higher, longer than in years past; creeks and ponds went muddy to dust… but we both thank God that there is still a well. I never hear your lips question how long the drought will last. I do hear a silent prayer in the tired beat of your heart. You fear this drought, wondering if it will tear us apart; but I only see it in the lines of your brown face; in the tired slump of your shoulders after a tearing day locating dead cattle, crunching through ruined crops. You fear that you are failing me; yet we realize our inner humbleness every night when we hold hands to kneel and give thanks for this day. For standing together through it all. quote: |
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Midnitesun![]()
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Posts 28647Gaia |
a photo to remember parched throats, maybe but not parched hearts |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Exquisite but painful picture, Karilea. I love these poems. |
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Ericc Member Elite
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Every poem of yours tells a story...quite vividly. Eric |
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Martie
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Sissie...you know how I love your Soddy journal...such a pleasure to read!! ![]() |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
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Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You are the Michaelangelo of the Soddy Journal! Your words adorn the ceiling of the Sistene Chapel of my mind! When reading these I am tranported to that very place in time of which you write! Okay, okay, but you get my point ... you ARE good! VERY GOOD! ![]() Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
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whew, filled with a modern writers images, all dressed up with many place to take the reader...wonderfully penned. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
An excellent read on a steamy day like today with temps reaching 100... I LOVE the Soddy Journal..and you know it!! ![]() Hugs~Nancy |
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artexeres Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 156south africa |
what love can be stronger than the love, that started with two people in duallity and through time and experience, forges into that singular unified love. thank you for a pleasant read. |
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