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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-07-29 06:47 PM


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Love’s Fear

30 July 2006


As if you can’t give up on love
then what was love in a way to give
To seek, to learn, to touch
a silent way of feeling

A deepness, a tranquil dependence
but what made love real inside
Two spirits captured in a light
that lost in the heart feeling intense

Yet separation hid the vision
masking that beauty to endure
As if the myth was love itself
the mercy of deceptive means

Not to know, but to know
wrong could be wrong
For love did have its freedom
as to that of compromise
For who would love, if love did not exist
while reading between the lines
means loving was always at risk


“Where there is no vision, the people perish:
but he that keepeth the law, happy is he.”
Proverbs 29: 18 KJV


© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

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© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-07-30 11:13 PM


From my POV, this is probably one of your best.
poettothecars
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2 posted 2006-07-31 01:57 AM


Maybe I should keep the girl who inspired me to write that poem then.  

When I sure would not know which poem was my best, but others have said my poetry has been "magnetic" lately.

Thank you for your kindness

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3 posted 2006-07-31 09:12 AM


Magnetic...they're right. That's it, exactly.

As for this one, I wish I'd written it....though I also wish I didn't have that feeling.

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4 posted 2006-07-31 09:24 AM


Extremely well done!

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

poettothecars
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5 posted 2006-07-31 01:05 PM


Again thank you for leaving some words to accompany my own words. When I do feel this poem is also worthy of such a visit
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