Open Poetry #38 |
Surround Sound |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The wine sits, both then aging wondering the taste of time. Will it be unhindered by the past of present climb? The distance within reach of a morning song and you, when air again is heavy with the longing I once knew. The moisture reigns with thunder thoughts and more of less cascade. These words in solitude press on. Now meaningless, they're laid Upon the constant of their find, those moments held within. The wine sits, both us aging in surround of silent "been". M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
lovely lovely you have such a way with words I love reading you ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
2 grapes l bottle of wine a field between them |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
M-lady, I think this is one of my favorites of yours. It is very lyrical and has so much meaning. Saving it. *hugs*....jo |
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