Open Poetry #38 |
Word Wrapping |
aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Words wrapping, sinuous sensuous, pliable, miable rhyming in tune silly with no meaning scribbles unread, truths unsaid A song. A dance. loss of conscious thought loneliness it brought. consider the rage put fear at rest Delusions and illusions woven in dreams. aziza [This message has been edited by aziza (07-30-2006 03:50 AM).] |
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elisalie16 Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 118new jersey |
loved it very much. |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
fast and moving, just let down by the number of spelling eroors a poet who cares |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You know, I have been saving my poems and was amazed at the errors that you speak of. I write fast and then wander away from it - guess that won't happen again without a good spell check first. My brain spells pretty well, but my fingers are pretty damned stupid. Thank you both for your comments. aziza |
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