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Heartless (senryu)
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Heartless (senryu) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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In North Dakota you sit by your father's bed he'll pass any day ten years between us I can't grieve for you at all karma is the pits |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Raw words...feelings expressed..thank you.. Goldenrose. ''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God'' |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
karma? what's it good for?  i figure mines already decided, i may as well go down sinning |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
perfectly titled Dixie. Powerful expression. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Sometimes one has to be heartless to protect the heart. Yes, powerful words, Dixie. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing And this too will pass. Good write. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent style for you Dixie...great write! Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I like karma! ~ the good kind!  But bad karma is indeed, "the pits"!   Linda  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks everyone |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I understand. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, I agree with Honeybunch. You are protecting your heart. Impressive words. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I, too, like Honeybunch's reply and agree... This is a nice coupling of senryus as a poem, and the ending?! powerful! I, too believe in karma, but not in revenge, just in letting go and letting God handle it.Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
this was a very good senryu. nice to see you again, keep up the awesome poetry. Poetry can get you very far |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
given I don't even know what a senryu is and at times more can be said I did think of this, In Florida you hold to a heart this small world Together hands across a net food for thought a poet who cares |
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