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Open Poetry #38

Broken Smile

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-07-27 01:08 AM

i dropped my smile
it was frozen on my face
held in place with the upturned corners
of my mouth; the moment i let down my guard
it fell and splintered at my feet
into a million, zillion pieces
i kicked it aside and walked away
muttering that my lips are better suited
for obsenities anyway.

aziza

Wilga
Junior Member

since 2006-07-25

Posts 22

1 posted 2006-07-27 01:13 AM

Lol. I almost spilt my coffee. Great.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-07-27 02:13 AM

wow! this is awesome!

I love it!

elisalie16
Member

since 2006-07-12

Posts 118
new jersey

3 posted 2006-07-27 06:16 AM

ahaha aziza, this one made me smile. kudos!
i enjoyed it a lot.

--a

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

4 posted 2006-07-27 12:17 PM

*snorts laughing*
omg honey .. this is priceless
I needed this today!

~Sheli~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2006-07-27 12:32 PM

aziza....everyone catches themselves from time to time, wearing a mask. Enjoyed the introspective truth.

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