Open Poetry #38 |
Summer Dreams |
BugBuggy Member
since 2005-12-19
Posts 130michigan |
The scent of pine rests on the air, There is the sound of water slapping agianst the shore. Birds are winging thru the sky, The sun is shining bright and high. Summer has come to Camelot, oh, to be there once agian. In your arms, in loves embrace, to feel your touch, to see your face. longing for you and our Camelot. BUG 7-25-06 |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
I love it!! And it was made all the better by a reference to Camelot! I love the first line especially, nice image You've gone wrong; you've gone wrong in your mind-tank |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very pretty |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Very pretty. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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BugBuggy Member
since 2005-12-19
Posts 130michigan |
thank you for the very kind words...you are all so wonderful BugBuggy |
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