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Open Poetry #38

Shaken and Stirred

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2006-07-25 09:28 PM

Spill the warmth of my breath upon the
delicate ear....enticing....exciting....
Inviting...and more.

For as the hour escapes and tugs
the wandering moon...I softly sleep
amongst the daisies that dance
at dawn’s feast of the night.

And as the moon’s dust falls lightly
to earth....I shall smile...awakening
in fleeting flitters of soft sensual
slumber...whispering as passion’s
flicker dances into the air and falls
delicately to earth...enwrapped in
the wonder of she who moves me,
stirs my lust and boils the blood
of my waking soul...again....

again...

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

1 posted 2006-07-25 10:05 PM

Endlessly romantic. I like this very much.

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

2 posted 2006-07-25 10:37 PM

This is beauty - it sings to me.

aziza

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-07-25 11:42 PM

Oh Barry! Sigh... again

and again...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2006-07-26 12:01 PM

nice daisy imagery

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2006-07-26 11:42 AM

For as the hour escapes and tugs
the wandering moon...I softly sleep
amongst the daisies that dance
at dawn’s feast of the night.

I wish so, I could write this lovely, maybe someday? Positive and robust, yet soft, but clear...

such beautiful imagry....

thank you for sharing

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