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antonym . (The Weed, #42)

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2006-07-25 08:45 PM

antonym

flamingo island
all shiny pink and sun
one black feather
twirling down

a dandelion
its time past now
one seed clinging
the wish unflown

morning air too cool
butterfly wings
can only tremble
while the bird stalks

love is serendipity
there is no antonym

there should be

(The Weed, #42)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-07-26 08:43 AM

JaimeMyJaime~

Shhh ...~

This quietly twirls ...
a mere soft-feathered rush
of breathless sigh escapes~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-07-26 11:20 AM

yes, indeed, agree with Margie, this was my favorite of yours...simply lovely

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2006-08-02 10:33 AM

a dandelion
its time past now
one seed clinging
the wish unflown

You write poignant perfectly... pretty draped in veil of might-have-been... This is superb!!

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

4 posted 2006-08-02 09:53 PM

This is very well done. I am so glad I took a moment to see what I had missed. Just lovely.

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