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Ahead...From Summer
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Ahead...From Summer |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Seed fluff floats, like souls abandoned. Kites and football, how i tire of these hot languid days, too many for me now. Never do i tire of birds colours, their life a joy, a miracle witnessed. My mind is thrown forward to chill evenings of stars and frost glittering, mornings of mist vaporising from earth, crisp sunshine scenes, flawless days of grace and beauty shimmering bright. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Looking forward to cooler days ahead. Even my plants are staggering in the heat...however...you said it well! I especially like the line breaks that you used. It lends clarity to your words. Shenachie |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Bridget...cooler days will surely follow...then we can become alive..thank you for your words of kindness.. Goldenrose. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Phil... Your imagery brings this piece to life. Wonderfully penned. Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so lovely  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
evenings of stars and frost glittering, mornings of mist vaporising from earth, crisp sunshine scenes, flawless days of grace and beauty shimmering I love summer, and this reminded me just how outstanding it is...thank you |
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