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deasomnians Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 87California |
loss for words closing throat never heard never spoke flailing lies paling skin stifled cries let panic in frozen heart reaching hand never part unspoken plan "Nature has implanted in our minds an insatiable longing to seek the truth" - CJCL Convention Theme 2005 |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
a minimum of words capturing a maximum of emotion. Very well done. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 well done! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dea~ What a lovely convey of thought presented so effectively~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
...quick spiral of despair...I lost my breath just reading it. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Absolute poetry! You got it across with a 'wham' with so few words. |
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deasomnians Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 87California |
Thank you all so much. i'm glad you like it! "Nature has implanted in our minds an insatiable longing to seek the truth" - CJCL Convention Theme 2005 |
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