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Emotions nomad |
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Wilga Junior Member
since 2006-07-25
Posts 22 |
Newbie to here, and the net in general. This seemed a great place to learn from. Not sure about my style of poetry or even if it is, but I like to write so I thought I would see how they go. Emotions Nomad Emotions, spewing forth in burning vengence, leaving all before in turmoil Taking control of all to come, a tattered remnant of distorted memories Higher peaks of chilling ectasy, dispelling all our past histories I can only reach into a gutted soul, a gaping wound of mortal disdain Desire, beauty, kindness and love, seem only there for me to despoil Strike from these chains I try, to find within me that one desire A kernal, soft to hold, rising to the shining sun, out of my soul's eternal mire Bind my blackened heart to yours, I need, I cry, I campaign Will it still be for me, life's sweet simplicity of a loves greater virtue A darkened path, making a mockery, a travesty of me I see a tunnel, a glimmer, a hope, can a future still be had A step upon a rotting path, my desires trying to pursue Loves great promise, a thorny prick, reminds me to be wary Less it all come back, I remain emotions nomad Wilga |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Wilga! Yes, PiP IS a great place to learn from... as well as to just enjoy! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Well hello Newbie this was spatial movement...kept the images powerfully presenting a real drama, real winter value, elements which consider us the treatment and the "A kernal" spectacular, to me anyway, for most of the time a kernal is breathlessly worth drowning in and more valuable then any thing... enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome aboard! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~  For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
Welcome!! (I'm a relative newbie too) Stunning poem. The imagery was beautiful and touching. And I love the idea of an 'emotion nomad', that's such an evocative thought. Well done, Where black, bleeding roses await the Thirteen, |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wilga~ Welcome to PiP, where those with poetic nomadic thoughts find a home~ A wonderful circle of share is here~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Wilga Junior Member
since 2006-07-25
Posts 22 |
Thanks to all for the wonderful replies. There is such depth here on these forums, so many talented people, that I cannot help but imporve. This is a great place to put up my feet and call home for a while wilga |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
how did I miss this? I feel the ache and the need to purge...I think I need to cry..  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Powerful work! "Strike from these chains I try, to find within me that one desire A kernal, soft to hold, rising to the shining sun, out of my soul's eternal mire" Welcome! |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Glad I happened in here where I rarely come. Your work is a delight to read. Welcome! Rae |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm glad I didn't miss out on this one, as it's a wonderful read. Welcome. I love 'nomad' imagery, and find your concept of being an emotional nomad very refreshing. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I felt the scurry of emotions in the beginning and a more relaxed tempo to the end .... ... Home!! Glad to see your journey has brought you here, Write to your emotions content! Ct |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Welcome. I enjoyed your work, or rather, was captured. A wonderful work of expression. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
This is an excelent expressionof what is going on within you. Keep up the writing! And of course, welcome to Passions!!! Kristabell "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Wow, I Really Like This, Great Write! and Welcome to PIP! I Thought of You Today, |
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