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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-07-25 07:48 AM


she was candy coated in her regulations
proper stuck to envelops
twice licked stamps
with strangers faces
that she kept out of the sun

except at evening
with her back to the windows
and her dreams to the mirrors
she told secrets out loud
to her favorite doctor's son

he never did seem concerned
with the extent of her perversions
said he had healing lotions
she could wear on her hair
to cover the gray

and magic hands too if she wanted
something to hold to her bosom
as a gift from a master
to knead her heart
when her heart needed needing

more than her skin needed sin
_______________

daark

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bel1e
Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631

1 posted 2006-07-25 08:01 AM


sweet sin, indeed~
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2006-07-25 08:24 AM


bel1e thanks little one, your eyes always sooth.
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2006-07-25 09:07 AM


she was candy coated in her regulations
proper stuck to envelops
twice licked stamps
with strangers faces
that she kept out of the sun



except at evening
with her back to the windows
and her dreams to the mirrors
she told secrets out loud
to her favorite doctor's son

incredible

he never did seem concerned
with the extent of her perversions
said he had healing lotions
she could wear on her hair
to cover the gray


yup, use em all the time...

and magic hands too if she wanted
something to hold to her bosom
as a gift from a master
to knead her heart
when her heart needed needing

more than her skin needed sin


such gifts you orrate, taking me to the medium of the inner
whoa!!

Morning D

thanks for the visuals-outstanding!

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
4 posted 2006-07-25 10:59 AM


Those mirrors are trouble every time!

Morning Daark!  

seraphin
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
5 posted 2006-07-25 01:28 PM


You've mastered your craft well. Very exciting to read your work.
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
6 posted 2006-07-25 03:56 PM




"and magic hands too if she wanted
something to hold to her bosom
as a gift from a master"

Sigh... if she's smart she wants...


Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

7 posted 2006-07-25 06:38 PM


primo stuff here babe,
you do soul touch so well, and like no other...

a new keeper and favorite..




give me your heart make it real
or else forget about it...Santana

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
8 posted 2006-07-25 06:58 PM


to knead her heart
when her heart needed needing


love it!!


M

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