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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-05-25 12:07 PM



Guitar Man

He'll play you
straight to hell.
Its all lies,
every story he tells.
One Saturday night
he kissed three different
women goodnight.
Be careful lest
you become one
of his sweethearts.
He'll play you a
mean broken heart.

JamesLee
May17
2006
A different take
on "Guitar Man".
Wrote this one night
hanging out with a
friend after listening
to Guitarman.

© Copyright 2006 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2006-05-25 12:12 PM


"He'll play you a
mean broken heart."


enjoyed this James

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-05-25 12:18 PM


yeah I've known a few
The Lady
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3 posted 2006-05-25 12:40 PM




"He'll play you
straight to hell'

And he has several times James but oh, you gotta love him. I like this write!


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4 posted 2006-05-25 12:51 PM


well, you better watch out for
those guitar women too
they'll kiss you
mean and sassy
all the way to
well,
you know

Debo
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5 posted 2006-06-01 07:06 AM


You know what they say about Guitar people?
They will love you and leave you for the next door. they are married to that guitar.
My guitars name is brad

Debo

LeeJ
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6 posted 2006-06-01 07:43 AM


yep, certainly do know this guy...several of them, and cannot help but feel very badly for not only them, but the gazillion hearts they hurt or destroy.  

Hugs to ya...

XOx Uriah xOX
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7 posted 2006-06-01 10:48 AM


I'm a guitar man.  Yes, it has happened...
But I never intended to hurt anyone and far more times than not...it was me that bore the scars.   My goodness!   I fall in love SOOO easily.   I fall in love at least 3 times a day.  So...  I picked up the mandolin.
I can't explain it but things seem to cool down with a smaller instrument.   ::smiles::

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8 posted 2006-06-01 10:57 AM


@ Uriah's reply !!!
(see below message !)

And, JamesMichael~
I've got one of those 'Guitar' Men ...
***and LOL AGAIN ...
(his user member name here is MiniGuitarMan)
so far ... so good~
This chorus of love is alive and well~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -       noles1@totcon.com     

HopeS
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9 posted 2006-06-01 12:04 PM


Yes I know one that has done just that

Hope

vandana
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10 posted 2006-06-01 12:11 PM


enjoyed
aziza
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11 posted 2006-07-15 10:25 PM


I like the honesty and the stark truth in this poem.

aziza

Joyce Johnson
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12 posted 2006-07-15 10:33 PM


Oh yes, I had one of those guitar loving men, but he was all done breaking hearts after he settled in with me.  Joyce
The Lady
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13 posted 2006-07-16 04:54 PM




James, you tell it so well. Damn guitar men. If they don't make you stronger they will kill you. And Uriah tells the truth... they fall in love 3 times a day and every time it's the REAL thing. And about that smaller instrument... what???


TinaTrivett
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14 posted 2006-07-16 04:55 PM


lol Joyce...I'm married to a guitar man. My son became one too..
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15 posted 2006-07-16 09:47 PM


Love this one James..
and the replies are such fun to read.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

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