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Open Poetry #38

A Bedtime Story

Billy_tha_Kidd
Junior Member

since 2006-07-17

Posts 27
Indiana USA

0 posted 2006-07-24 02:55 AM

....and then the evening sun in tide
putt's to rest it's cloudy bride;
the murky dog star barks in fright
into our blossomed bloom of night.

Tho' the sum of sin is paid
to every other meter maid,

with arms a-cross

and lip un-bent,

paying postage with a kiss.

...and the demon deep inside
stirs and hopes, with hidden eye
to glance the passion- thought in flight...
deep the devil's darkened light.

and,

Tho' the sum of sin is paid
to every other meter maid,

in lectric loss

and passion spent

never can remember this.

elisalie16
Member

since 2006-07-12

Posts 118
new jersey

1 posted 2006-07-24 03:11 AM

i thought this was absolutely amazing

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

2 posted 2006-07-24 03:18 AM

I think this is a keeper. I have read it three times and like it more each time. It's really good.

aziza

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

3 posted 2006-07-24 07:56 PM

I do love this...simply adore your words and flow...dreamy

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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