Open Poetry #38 |
Patient Lives |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Patient Lives quote:Rainer M. Rilke As the rose grows, amid rock and soil, blooming pink of health, yet wanting more, amid prayer and love, the patient lives. What remains unsolved, is how long will the rose grow? Newly grounded, some inner voice says, forever! and some elder voice whispers Carpe Diem! I did not know Rilke before some one poet spoke, asking, quietly, “do you know…?” and made a wise introduction of Rilke to Rilling. The thrill began. Who could have realized the magic? ~*~ Patient Lives…. Where, and When we stand immersed in hearing, sensing, knowing, feeling, loving. Praying. A patient’s life may well indeed seek to live… and then become a patient life, which, when many readers, yes, even you… will seek to have such a patient life, yet, and if there are a multitude of you, then there will be a multitude of patient lives; those who will spread among us, seeding soil of pain with hope, whose need is plenty; those of you who will voluntarily raise their hand, and say, “this is my line, let me write it for you”; or those of you who will raise a flag of honor; or wear a badge of courage. Recently, it came to me, that for a patient to live, one must know patient lives…. and then is when we will all wear, and perhaps bear more than one. For it is true; as I know you do just this. ~*~ For the special prayers with a grateful heart. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Karilea, this is beautiful, so inspiring with a perfect picture and quote to preface the poem.....This is a masterpiece, and it's a keeper Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always bringing a smile thank you |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank You Sun...Your words are always wise and filled with hope. |
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Martie
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Posts 28049California |
Sissie "A patient’s life may well indeed seek to live… and then become a patient life," You know I am seeking a patient life...each breath tells me to wait...it will come...the bloom indeed is fragile...and too soon gone, but what of the earth below it filled with digging worms. Each day is a miracle. Your poem shows the wonder of you....spirit blessed and a sissie extraordinary! |
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picturegramic Member
since 2006-05-16
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Inspiring write filled with hope. Love the pic and the words that go hand in hand. picturegramic :) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Ahhh Sunshine! This one is stunning! You wove those words this way and that. |
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Martie
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library thing |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Rilke, Rilling and roses! Life, love, tranquility, wondering and wisdom just don't get better than that! Thank you for being and disseminating you! - Owl |
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Ratleader
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Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
In the times we cannot carry, only bear with a hurt too deep to bury, two may share; even in the darkest places, no despair may intrude to mar their faces, for they care, giving strength to one another, and a prayer. Know this now, if there’s no other to repair, in this hour I am your brother; I’ll be there. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
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Momma K? I needed my dose of Sunshine today.. and I found it, as always, right here amidst these pages of blue.... tis a keeper, oh Sunny one.... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Karilea, this is just beautiful. I hope you are doing well. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
This touches the depths of the heart. Thank you. Rae |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
I just cannot write poetry like that a poet who cares |
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