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You're my Saturday
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You're my Saturday |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Emptiness within the rise and fall of our insecurities Longing within the pulse of your being I fell asleep in your dreams coddled protected in your thoughts I feel more Than I'm allowed I want more Than I'm willing to admit I've convinced myself That You are not my destiny I fall victim To the rise and fall Of your pulse I'm drowning within our broken connection within our dreams within the static frequency That burns my heart Stuck Between the Emptiness longing and the rise and fall of loving you I can't seem to reach you So far away To tell you That You're my Saturday If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
feel this in my bones and the title got me first very nice write [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (07-24-2006 01:14 AM).] |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
"You're my Saturday" That's great I'm not smart, I'm just a tricky dumb person. |
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elisalie16 Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 118new jersey |
i also liked the title to this. it was what made me read it, and i am very glad i did. i liked it. very nice. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
The title drew me in - your writing kept me here. aziza |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write! love the new pic too  |
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