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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
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0 posted 2006-07-22 07:16 PM


Her tender caring eyes--
Expressive and often smiling.

Her warmth of person--
Loving and so needing to be loved.

Her soft and caring touch--
Imparting such a delicateness.

Her quick and keen wit--
Showing obvious intelligence and much appreciated humor.

Her beautiful smile--
Lighting up her face with a glow.

Her sweet unassuming ways--
Shyly requesting what she desires.

Her kindly soothing voice when she speaks--
Her soft meolodic voice when she sings quietly to herself.

Her caring hugs and kisses--
Which displays her heart of passion.

Her true spirit of optimism--
Which catapults her over many difficulties faced.

Her innate trust in God--
And her ability to see His Hand in many things.

Her love of family--
And her genuine concern and regard for them all.

Her ability to interact with others--
Often with total strangers, as if new found friends.

Her ability to be strong, when needed--
Yet not domineering, but gladly aiding, as she can.

Her beautiful spirit of praise, oneness and cooperation--
As she joyously sings hymns of praise and love together with me.

Her awareness of her perceived weaknesses--
Coupled with her determination to cope and/or overcome.

Her willingness to search out and change if needed--
Driven by her willingness to please and also to be right.

Her ability to totally submit and love without reservation--
To give and show in such beauty, the depth of her soul.

And finally,

The way she loves me so much and exclusively--
Making me the most cherished, blessed and happiest man on the face of the earth!

NO!  These are things I LOVE about JANE!!!!


Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

© Copyright 2006 David L. White - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2006-07-22 07:19 PM


sounds like a total package

good write

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
2 posted 2006-07-24 10:08 PM


She sounds like an angel, David, and this poem shows how appreciative you are.

God Bless

   Rae

the quell
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since 2006-07-19
Posts 144
Liverpool, UK
3 posted 2006-07-24 10:10 PM


that was really sweet; it shows real devotion! Well done
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