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Open Poetry #38
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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2006-07-21 09:52 PM


The frosted dreams
on february lips,
now kiss
the summergreen
in flower panorama,

the monarchs shudder,
asymettrical
with coral wings,
in anticipation
of the wind's umbrella,

a begged reprieve

on physchedlic streams

to free one's self,
if but only
on a mindflight
through the others.





[This message has been edited by Denise (07-29-2006 05:06 PM).]
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-07-21 11:20 PM

must be the ultimate thunderstorm
enjoyed the flying cans imagery
bklynboy
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florida
2 posted 2006-07-26 06:53 PM

Deep and insightful
Denise
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3 posted 2006-07-29 05:07 PM

Edited as per your request inkedgoddess.

Very lovely. Both versions.
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2006-07-29 05:46 PM

amazing work!
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