Open Poetry #38 |
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A TOUR OF MY SOUL |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
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A TOUR OF MY SOUL I have moved into the depths of my soul past the place where the last fish soars into the reaches where my bones press against my bones and darkness grinds against the night and I know at any moment I may burst into a flame and I know at any moment I may pass into a light |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"into the reaches where my bones press against my bones and darkness grinds against the night" _________________ I love everything about this poem, especially the above lines....I find myself relating to your words. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"and darkness grinds against the night" that was just too cool... ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome last two verses! |
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picturegramic Member
since 2006-05-16
Posts 112 |
I think the last two stanzas are awesome. Keep writing, picturegramic :) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Listen shirtless, I don't want to start a bad case of ego or anything but do you know how good you are? |
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