Open Poetry #38 |
White Cool |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
White Cool Sun blazoned grasses ’neath dark withering leaves curling ’round petals that bore earth and love scents moments ago heat springs eternally internal in summertime… some cracks in the concrete would fill in, maybe with running waters, but only if it could melt rock once again… and backlighting comes in through a window moment when veins of leaves are sun-struck showing their need to them that would smile knowing they turned just to watch the sun set. They do, you know. Even as a day’s heat will bake them dry bringing them near close to extinction… still, leaves and scented petals will follow the sun, until the white cool of moon lets them just be. © Karilea Rilling Jungel July 21, 2006 For Martie, who was watering the parched. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie....the sunflowers are falling over...but yet...they had their day in the most wonderful way...is right that time moves in that way. I love this..thank you!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"They do, you know. Even as a day’s heat will bake them dry bringing them near close to extinction… still, leaves and scented petals will follow the sun, until the white cool of moon lets them just be." Just beautiful Karilea! It has been so hard keeping up with the watering this summer. What a scorcher it has been. Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
so beautiful we are into three digits now for a few days and the flowers and my keets are complaining thanks for the word refreshments! and for your generous reply to my lavendar bouquet feather duster |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"They do, you know. Even as a day’s heat will bake them dry bringing them near close to extinction…' Exquisite Karilea! Flowers know how to live till the very end. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful Karilea! I had to bring all of my potted plants in, because of the heat. it has been over 100 degrees, here. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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just because I wanted to |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I do love this |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
The words almost float off the tongue as I read them out loud. This poem is a painting of words. aziza |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
We gaze upon our favored flowers but cannot mete their healing powers. We know our soul absorbs such bowers As joy within ascends new towers. Lovely to read you. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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