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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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momma got me a rockin' horse made from slippery elm and painted with lotion from the cravin' tree made me do my boy time in the saddle swallow with my hands tied often in the gallop place giddy up momma said I was bad skin from the storms she knew when she was runnin from jesus in her bentley car bedroom said there were demons too in my eyes when I smiled said they made her love me more than her needle high gravy she spoke me as bone of daddy sin _______________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-21-2006 09:14 AM).] |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
your writing always makes me think too much especially at this Godforsaken hour of the morning so I always read them and rarely comment 'cause I can't think of anything vaguely intelligent to say but this, I love and relate to *smiles* You are terribly talented ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
He does that, Sheli... makes you think. Thanks, DS... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sheli one, is it morning there/here..oh drat I missed another sunset..thanks so much for your read and humble thanks for the comments. _____________ ms sun, for you a crooked grin and electric hug, thanks lady |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
momma said I was bad skin from the storms she knew when she was runnin from jesus in her bentley car bedroom said there were demons too in my eyes when I smiled said they made her love me more than her needle high gravy she spoke me as bone of daddy sin  love your writing and the images they present....hugsss you...  And so it those we live with |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady lauren thank you for leaning over and looking out this window |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS You got me with the personal poignant of this, my friend...that's why I think it's one of your best.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lil neighbor, thanks to you, slow hugs in return |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
momma said I was bad skin from the storms she knew when she was runnin from jesus in her bentley car bedroom said there were demons too in my eyes when I smiled said they made her love me more than her needle high gravy she spoke me as bone of daddy sin makes me love ya more to...  this was incredible...and a man walking side by side with my concept, that even more smiles me, as you would say.  Morning D.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Leej, you do smile me, full grown kid grinz. thanks so much for the eyes |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
This has got to be the coolest poem I've read all year of this '06. Bravo maestro. I'm not smart, I'm just a tricky dumb person. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
EdGrim, ah shucks amigo..thanks, that was a blessing sir. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"said there were demons too in my eyes when I smiled said they made her love me more than her needle high gravy she spoke me as bone of daddy sin" Who wouldn't love a boy with demons in his eyes. You always amaze me Stranger. Sheli's right.. you're very talented. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady ms, thank you so much...your reads make me smile. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
dear friend, talented you are, and much, much more...  you do have a way about you, yes you do.. seek the flame within yourself |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
my daddy said I was born under the sign of the happy wanderer; mother said I was born holding a sign that spelled trouble lol, maybe they were both right and you... DS, were born under the sign of love with the gift of knowing how to make others FEEL 'neath visible skin |
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