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Like a Whisper
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Like a Whisper |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Like a whisper i was here once speaking but now silent once laughing now only a smile lights my face Like a breeze i was here drifting through the empty rooms of my yearning heart Like a rainbow i was here i came as the rain fell under the sun tears among drops Like a silent plea i was here begging silently to be understood. aziza |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
ooo honey I love this it feels like a whisper beautiful ~*Sheli*~ |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
the high and low journey of emotions beautifully expressed Hope |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Aziza~ I thought I heard a soft whisper~ I like this~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
softly touching |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
You whisper the plea of me, amazing how similar feelings are with us all and how well you have expressed them here my friend, I think that few understand or let themselves understand deep feelings within. Enjoying the reads aziza, take care and be well. Sincerely Rick |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you for reading my poem. It means a lot to me to share it and to read your comments. aziza |
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