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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-07-21 03:19 AM


Like a whisper
i was here
once speaking
but now silent
once laughing
now only a smile
lights my face
Like a breeze
i was here
drifting through
the empty rooms
of my yearning heart
Like a rainbow
i was here
i came as the rain
fell under the sun
tears among drops
Like a silent plea
i was here
begging silently
to be understood.

aziza

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divine chaos
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1 posted 2006-07-21 08:17 AM


ooo honey I love this
it feels like
a whisper

beautiful

~*Sheli*~

HopeS
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2 posted 2006-07-21 08:30 AM


the high and low journey of emotions beautifully expressed

Hope

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3 posted 2006-07-21 09:30 AM


Aziza~

I thought I heard a soft whisper~

I like this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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4 posted 2006-07-21 05:57 PM


softly touching
Rick
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5 posted 2006-07-23 07:45 AM


You whisper the plea of me, amazing how similar feelings are with us all and how well you have expressed them here my friend, I think that few understand or let themselves understand deep feelings within.
Enjoying the reads aziza, take care and be well.

Sincerely
Rick

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
6 posted 2006-07-24 03:29 AM


Thank you for reading my poem.  It means a lot to me to share it and to read your comments.

aziza

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