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Open Poetry #38
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themute
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0 posted 2006-05-24 06:39 PM

No sight I’ve seen is ever the clearer
My eyes usually marked with blotches
For no woman I’d meet could be dearer
As most men would so look at their watches
I watch only her and hear her sweet pitch
For she is ever the queen of my love
And yet as our eyes do block out the mix
Of imperfections in our sight so dove
Do come to me inside my head I sense
Such a common thing we take for granted
As sight as seen so threw our eyes defense
Yet from sights of her I have recanted
      My love for her is so much stronger then
      The sense of sight from which my problems send


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-05-24 10:11 PM

I love the theme here, rhyming is good also
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