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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-07-20 02:16 AM


Oh, little pot, sitting dusty on the high darkest shelf
Why not pick up a mirror and take a look at yourself?
See how you sneer at the kettle so shiney and bright
Perhaps, you may ask if you could step in her warm light.
For, little pot, now sitting rusty, appearing enviously green
the mirror will show how ugly you have made yourself seem.
The words you spew are so venomously ill-spoken and bad
if you weren't so nasty, you would realize you look mighty sad.
But, little pot, you have forgotten you were a kettle so new
How sad to see how warped, filthy and tainted you grew.
Now ice you could not melt or water could you boil
instead you are filled with dusty cob webs and bits of old soil.
Cracked and dried on the surface, a handle sagging and rotten.
It's sad to see the beauty you once held is now totally forgotten.
Oh, little pot, high on the shelf in the cold storage shed
Sadly you will be discarded, wasted thoughts in your head.

aziza

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1 posted 2006-07-20 02:26 AM


I love this! Very clever!
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