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themute
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0 posted 2006-07-20 01:33 AM



I could fall in love with you
In a day or probably two
But I’ll still be wishing
With every day and every corner
That I’ll see your pretty face
And that you’ll see me in that place  
As a man you want to see
And a person that’s worth a-speaking
Tell me true and tell me slowly
Tell me loud and tell me knowing
That your words will make it happen
Make my love forced come to you  
By hands of yours write love is new
And dance a waltz that shall not end
You ask love comes I tell you when
When stars have shun so bright as day
When clouds have closed and dark as night
When half the gold is twice as much
When we have found the simple pleasures
When quickly comes the ancient ones
Then love will be ours and love will be true
The fading oh the hours lure our feet to the glue
Let come to the seat that sits down your cares
To know love only comes in four eyes and one pair
Now seated we see in another our eyes
The knowing that growing is far passionate cries    
Our touch is more proof than we need
Soon our true love will come here and feed
With knowledge comes the knowledge of keys
And so we know now that now we will leave
Were love lives I answer you silent
In a room far away that’s locked and that’s lonely
So soon we will be there to open its door
And soon will our wears be away on the floor
Hurry to rise to the earliest fall
Fall to the pillow that placed is your head
So love can replace you and me in its stead
Oh love coming up and love coming down
Love making this beautiful flirtatious of sounds
And by this nights eventual end
My number with care I eventual send

I am the two-toed wanderer

© Copyright 2006 Matthew Patrick Holbert - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-07-20 02:22 AM


When stars have shun so bright as day
When clouds have closed and dark as night
When half the gold is twice as much
When we have found the simple pleasures
When quickly comes the ancient ones


wow

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Gaia
2 posted 2006-07-21 11:04 PM


"When half the gold is twice as much"
Oh, I wish I'd written that line!
A gentle romantic write.  

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2006-07-22 01:14 AM


Nice writing...James
Ceinwyn
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4 posted 2006-07-22 12:43 PM


why did I have to go read this??? this was beautiful..makes me long..and wish and *sigh* makes me feel a bit vunerable...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Heather Miller
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5 posted 2006-07-22 12:48 PM


WOW......all I can say is WOW!!!!!!!

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

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