Open Poetry #38 |
Times of Change |
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This softening cascade of times shimmers, making ripples beneath the warm surface,. The haze of history vanishes and the illusion of the future hangs expectantly - from here, horizons stretch to certainty. There are no broken bridges, no constellations of debris and my eyes are clear at last, the veil is gone, ripped apart by the festering wounds long held and now healed. The morning butter sun melts slowly coating the landscape in promises of cookies and coffee, warm soothing redeeming, it fills me to my bones and I am golden, mellow because of it. The final ripples of the past sink into the salty water, that was made up of tears and the clear, clean, fresh water of the new washes me. The sands are shaken and dirt falls away, leaving me newborn. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The final ripples of the past sink into the salty water, that was made up of tears and the clear, clean, fresh water of the new washes me. The sands are shaken and dirt falls away, leaving me newborn. Very beautifully said! Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a beautiful soulful write! and it is great to read you again, poet Kethry. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a vivid piece! And the ending is just wonderful! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Have missed ya, good to see you and thanx for a nice write... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
So lovely Keth...nice to see you again |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
So nice to see you.....this is so pretty and inspiring. It gives of hope. Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kethry Excellent one of your best. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such a beautiful emerging... I like this very much! |
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