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Sunshine
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0 posted 2006-07-19 07:08 AM




And I can say is, Thank You


Young or Old, there will be a time
to capture in mirrored wide smiles
given me, because I will know
now is the time;

Now is the time
for it has been shortened
to a knowledge of longevity;
and in that
I cannot find any weakness;
I must not find any weakness.

To recognize time is short;
count blessings and remembering
only good times;
count, count them, count all,
and I find you, you, and you again…
I touch your shoulder, once more,
I lay my hand upon your arm, tenderly,
fold you into a warm embrace, and
I do it with knowledge that it is
the last time.

To let you know, now, that life
is in need, rightfully so,
of living, dancing, laughing,
embracing, and giving back all
of the good that has been given you;

and if I held life,
tight fisted and fearful, before love….
it would just shatter

like fine crystal

As would love, herself.

Thank you, life, for loving me enough
to let me skip in dappled moments
that no one should ever
forget.

© Copyright 2006 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2006-07-19 07:10 AM


lovely love ms, enjoyed reading you
passing shadows
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2 posted 2006-07-19 08:00 AM


I am feeling appreciative this morning myself

moreso since I read this

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3 posted 2006-07-19 08:48 AM


Remembering all of the good times....what a treasure.  Good Morning Karilea!!!!

HUGS,
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink


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4 posted 2006-07-19 09:01 AM


"Thank you, life, for loving me enough
to let me skip in dappled moments
that no one should ever
forget."

I could never have said it as beautifully as this..
To dance and embrace life itself..
what joy you bring to my face and heart today.
Thank YOU for delivering such a perfect gift this morn.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

divine chaos
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5 posted 2006-07-19 09:04 AM


wunnaful wunnaful, much enjoyed the read this morning   thanks for sharing

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

aziza
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6 posted 2006-07-19 01:29 PM


So beautiful!

aziza

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7 posted 2006-07-19 09:34 PM


ah lady sunshine, this poem is written as only you could do...it shines from within
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