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themute
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0 posted 2006-07-19 02:43 AM



A life that’s lived forever
Is that even life at all?
Maybe I’ll find out and maybe I wont
I don’t think I care any more
Maybe I do
We are all living an eternity that pass us by
Let it pass me by
Every moment is a forever that passes
I now realize I am alive
I am real I am
I thank my cigarette for this moment of clarity

I am the two-toed wanderer

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-07-19 03:37 AM


who wants to live forever? surely not me
themute
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2 posted 2006-07-19 03:40 AM


we already do, you are now

I am the two-toed wanderer

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Gaia
3 posted 2006-07-19 10:11 AM


this smokes
(now put that nasty cig down before you hurt yourself)

LeeJ
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4 posted 2006-07-19 10:52 AM


love the sarcasum, the dead honest gut wrenching quesions of this, and also the humor...

reminded me of that song "smoke, smoke, smoke that cigerette"

thank you for sharing.

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