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Heat Wave |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Heat Wave In the cinnabar the air curves female in a silent request of damp strands yearning for wet sand and the thunder of an ocean face needing all her pieces displaced ----- RP from 03....Because it's hot!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, what a gorgeous 'hot' write love that new photo cool hugs to you |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
what a poem, what descriptions, Martie, your a marvel...witty, ingenious and fascinating descriptions... it's sweltering here to....hugs, no wait, lets just smile at each other from afar, we might stick together...ugh! Love ya Me |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Love this, Martie. Just came in from weeding the very needy garden. Man, is it ever hot here, but guilt got the best of me and I withstood the heat. Your description is perfect! Especially can identify with the wet strands about now! You write 'yearning' very well. Wishing you a cool breeze... misce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieLoveSis~ Oh yeah ... it's not just a 'tropical heatwave' either~ I just read that yesterday ALL 48 lower states recorded at least 90 degrees and 21 of those states recorded 100 (+/-) Attsa' hotsie~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Loved your poem, Martie. I could feel the heat, in spite of it being winter here! - Owl |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
you can have my cold weather and the snow on the mountain outside my window then no doubt it will be hot as hell in my world come Christmas Day a poet who cares |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hiya, hot stuff! Cool write! ~ but not literally!  I'm even north of the 49th parallel ~ and I'm melting! Beautiful new photo of you!!!  Sending you a cooling, cyber hug, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You said it Martie! As EA replied it's even in the 90's in the great white north. Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
you make the hot sound so nice but I'll be staying inside where it's cool anyway lol ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
it is SO hot here... that I don't even turn on my AC for the drive home... truly! It's not that far... and by the time I would get home it would just be kickin' in... might as well let the clear sharp of the air edge me warm... just so, I think, to say I know what it's like to be near the sun.  |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
You say it oh so very well Martie - Paul |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Heated words have never been so lovely. aziza |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Great poetry Martie, as usual.  I'm glad I popped in, despite the heat over here. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
And so is the weather! Nice pic I think....may have missed its arrival because I've been away a while....so now's my chance to say yeah....I like. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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