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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2006-07-18 09:46 AM

A woman’s thoughts

tugging inside
between mundane & awe-inspiring
passion of moral fiber
claims an indisputable skylight
springing into morning...
like some alluring white dove
gliding it’s sea foam
along my flesh

feel of wind
moving through my soul
it’s water dragging me
from the clutches of my alarm
to presumptuous, for care of time
having only one reason to work

like the fragrance
of freshly sanded wood
simmering in the air

and it does work...
this big round face
of paradise
every room of guava swell
becomes an informal hum
pulsating life
of the
opus of morning

I become fixated
catching silver strands
in my spirit heart
inside this
cooking air
with breakfast generous
I can see the future
smiling...

while I blush
I reach out, and take this touch
for my very own

thick curls circulating
lifting me
wrapping me
in the smell of today
like hands impatiently pulling me
into the fragrance of all things
like a freshly painted mural
in tantalizing shades of memory
bravery perks
over a fresh chicory fanaticism

whispering
eyes of pollen
allowing me to taste
color
I am tender
to this flower skin
and to the swoop of mystery
gathering
a woven sweet grass basket
urging...reigniting

I search for nothing
want for no thing
this Tues. morn cobbler
smuggles me
deep into a lost horizon

the one I thought abandoned me
a million years ago
which is now
overly bright with aptitude

I am alive
with a privet book
of summer
fourteen years old
and somehow
somehow
I know
in the deepest
part of my soul
the affection
of this purpose

I had caused this
unnatural sound
and how it is almost
not quite...faraway
coming from a place
powerfully inside
poignant desire
for reawakening
artistic passion
with wide eyes
open mouth
new behaviors
burrowing into
the carriage of the next moment
like darkness
pulling the moon
high in the sky

I can hear
the footsteps of shadows
evocative
affirming
blazing-like
the face of God
writing large
cursives
all over my soul

I am in the Happy Birthday
of this over ripe moment
which falls across
the entire world

does anyone else see, feel and know?

ohhh Lord
ignite this passion
within the lives of
all human beings
impassion, impregnate
this symbolic painting
enriching birth
snuggling up close to mankind
whisper the wind of this message
into their souls
be the know
of who they are

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (07-18-2006 12:20 PM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-07-18 10:05 AM

Oh LeeJ, I think this is the best I've ever read from your pen, indeed, one that speaks to me more than any others I've read at this site.
I shall print this one out, and keep it nearby to read again and again. Thank you, for sharing your incredible soul, your eyes and heartbeat.
You just made my whole week glow with a new beginning POV. Yes, there is hope for us after all. ~sighing~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2006-07-18 10:43 AM

LeeJ

"does anyone else see, feel and know?"

How glorious to know this blossoming!! Your words are empowering.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2006-07-18 11:02 AM

Such an inspiring glow

Hope

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

4 posted 2006-07-18 03:55 PM

:: SMILES :: ::Snoopy dances:: ::SMILES::
:: bows ::

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2006-07-18 04:45 PM

"whisper the wind of this message"

~ I believe that you have just done so yourself, Lovely Lee! ~ and divinely at that!

Love & God's Light,
Linda

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2006-07-18 07:23 PM

Nice...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2006-07-18 07:40 PM

Ok, so what brand of Wheaties are you eating, young lady? I am duly and deeply impressed, and danged near copied the entire poem in here...

talk about grace under pressure.

This is marvelous. And it is libraried. And lighted.

Ohhhh Lord...

wonderful!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2006-07-18 09:28 PM

quote:
ohhh Lord
ignite this passion
within the lives of
all human beings
impassion, impregnate
this symbolic painting
enriching birth
snuggling up close to mankind
whisper the wind of this message
into their souls
be the know
of who they are

reading this again
what a mantra

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

9 posted 2006-07-18 09:37 PM

just .. wow.

*************************
I had caused this
unnatural sound
and how it is almost
not quite...faraway
coming from a place
powerfully inside
poignant desire
for reawakening
artistic passion
with wide eyes
open mouth
new behaviors
burrowing into
the carriage of the next moment
like darkness
pulling the moon
high in the sky
********************

I love these lines
wonderful!

This is the best of yours that
I've read, amazing write!

~*Sheli*~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2006-07-18 09:37 PM

Brava!!! Brilliant!
This is your best ever Lee!
What amazing talent you possess.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

11 posted 2006-07-18 09:44 PM

I enjoyed this very much. Flowed like honey on the tongue.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2006-07-19 08:37 AM

I do so love your thoughts!

kif kif
Member

since 2006-06-01

Posts 439
BCN

13 posted 2006-07-19 08:51 AM

LeeJ; frivolous and deep! A perfect combination. To me, this speaks a timeless wisdom in a 'coming of age' voice-that transition between girl and woman. You've managed to keep a virginal awe in the detail, while embracing an elemental knowlege of the whole.

Your style is fantastically 'now' without being pretentious, yet your content is full of experience. I'm very impressed. Thanks for the read.

I bet you're a great cook!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

14 posted 2006-07-21 10:20 AM

"like the fragrance
of freshly sanded wood
simmering in the air"

Excellent...

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Edward Grim
Senior Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

15 posted 2006-07-21 10:46 AM

A very descriptive write, very nice. I love deep descriptions in poetry. Cheers - Ed

I'm not smart, I'm just a tricky dumb person.

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