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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2006-07-18 05:10 AM



Here


in loneness
tender gives way
to tough
and I know
there are tears
echoing from a want
you search to find
I am here
I am still
here

just some words cut from
the diary of my heart



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-07-18 06:12 AM


it's good to know you're always here
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2 posted 2006-07-18 09:27 AM


I find myself echoing your ending... yes... excellent write!! *S*
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3 posted 2006-07-18 12:47 PM


OneSlick~

'there are tears
echoing from a want
you search to find'


I have heard the pleading cry of that same echo~

*HUGLETS*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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El_Campeador
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4 posted 2006-07-18 12:54 PM


"I am here
I am still
here"

Thanks. That is what I am feeling right now, and it blessed me to see you express it in such a wonderful way.

Ben

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2006-07-18 01:30 PM


always like a rock
dependable and solid
always there for me

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2006-07-18 02:47 PM


1slick_lady,
It's always nice to see it in writing.

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dancing 'neath the moon
7 posted 2006-07-18 08:02 PM


loverly

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

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