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Potatobunny Junior Member
since 2006-07-17
Posts 14 |
Thoughts You do not know how you scar with the words you use to label me You have no idea how you control with the words you use to pressure me You could never imagine how you cause pain with the words you use to insult me You will never know how you love with the arms you use to hold me |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Hi! I very much enjoyed your entrance post.. although if someone makes you feel badly with remarks.. Is it really love that you are feeling? Relax, make yourself at home.. we're a friendly family of writers and readers If you need any help please feel free to contact a Moderator or email me if you like. Thank you for signing my posts!!  ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is hard to follow up with a gracious reply when our Enchantress did the first so very well. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your Email for a very special greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Potatobunny Junior Member
since 2006-07-17
Posts 14 |
Thank you so much for giving me awesome replies. I used to be on a forum called everypoet.com and they hated my poetry so its so nice to have people like it. I will keep working on it to make it better. Again, thank you! -Potataobunny [edit] Oh and I almost forgot, I'm sorry but should I be checking my e-mail address or is there an e-mail service we can use through the website? |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Welcome to PiP. I think your poem has a lot of emotion. You shared such a personal part of you. Thank you. aziza |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Great first poem! Welcome! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome first post! Welcome to Passions! |
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Potatobunny Junior Member
since 2006-07-17
Posts 14 |
thank you all so much! you've encouraged me to write even more. |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
perhaps they feel the same about you, ever think o' that eh  just fooling, its a poem that pokes at human truth and so i say its good. welcome to pip and great sn. I am the two-toed wanderer |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Write more Potatobunny! I love the first one. Welcome! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Too often, people speak outloud (and write) before feeling the impact of the words they choose. Maybe the arms tell the truth? Welcome. I'm sorry you had such a bad experience at that other site. There are lots of friendly writers and readers here, and you will probably make 'friends' quickly here with your heartfelt words. Enjoy! |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
great entrance post! welcome PiP ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Welcome to Pip. Your thoughts are safe here and you will make many friends. I enjoyed your poem. - Owl |
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Potatobunny Junior Member
since 2006-07-17
Posts 14 |
You are all so nice to me so I am going to make sure that I critique all of your poems! PB |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Welcome to PiP~ You'll find us a likeable group~  When you post, there is a box at the bottom to check, before submitting, if you wish to receive an email notification that a reply has been posted to your poem~ We don't have an in-house mail system for notification of replies, they would go to the email address you provided us with when you signed up as a member here~ Hope that helps~ Enjoy your stay with us~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Potatobunny Junior Member
since 2006-07-17
Posts 14 |
ok, and by the way, yeah it does help. |
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