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divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon

0 posted 2006-07-16 11:15 PM



So close at heart
Yet far apart
Too much time to think
Tears consume
Our love seems doomed
Teetering on the brink

I push
You shove

We rise above
Stronger than before
Through thick and thin
We'll ride again
And I'll only
love you
more.


~*Sheli*~
2005

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2006-07-18 03:52 AM


Enjoyed...James
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2 posted 2006-07-18 09:31 AM


A lot of people think that real love means problem-free love... when the truth is, we all face adversities and the real is what helps love survive and grow instead of disintegrate. *S* I like this very much!
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3 posted 2006-07-18 12:49 PM


Sheli~

'We rise above
Stronger than before'


And that's just the way it can be~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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El_Campeador
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4 posted 2006-07-18 01:05 PM


The hard times should make love grow stronger. That is a proof that the love is real.
Thank you for sharing.

Ben

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2006-07-18 01:26 PM


Bitter ofttimes comes with the sweet ~ but the bitter times can make those sweet times ever so sweet!

May the sweetness in your relationship be the stronger of the two!


EA

divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon
6 posted 2006-07-18 07:56 PM


thank you all for reading.  This is one of my shortest writings, but also one of my favorites. Love is a rocky road and inevitably we all go through rough patches, but if we can love each other in spite of our faults, it makes it that much sweeter.  (and making up is fun!)

~Sheli~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

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