Open Poetry #38 |
I'll Love You More |
divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
So close at heart Yet far apart Too much time to think Tears consume Our love seems doomed Teetering on the brink I push You shove We rise above Stronger than before Through thick and thin We'll ride again And I'll only love you more. ~*Sheli*~ 2005 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A lot of people think that real love means problem-free love... when the truth is, we all face adversities and the real is what helps love survive and grow instead of disintegrate. *S* I like this very much! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sheli~ 'We rise above Stronger than before' And that's just the way it can be~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
The hard times should make love grow stronger. That is a proof that the love is real. Thank you for sharing. Ben “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bitter ofttimes comes with the sweet ~ but the bitter times can make those sweet times ever so sweet! May the sweetness in your relationship be the stronger of the two! EA |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
thank you all for reading. This is one of my shortest writings, but also one of my favorites. Love is a rocky road and inevitably we all go through rough patches, but if we can love each other in spite of our faults, it makes it that much sweeter. (and making up is fun!) ~Sheli~ By words the mind is winged |
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