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Denial
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Denial |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I deny the lump in my throat and the hurt in my heart. I deny that tears well behind my eyes I deny that I can be hurt and my soul bleeds I deny that I can't handle this any more I deny that I need you and that I miss you I am in denial aziza |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
well its good that you know your in denial because if you didn't then you would realy be in denial I am the two-toed wanderer |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Now, ain't that the truth! To not realize that would be the ultimate denial. |
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elisalie16 Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 118new jersey |
aziza i think you did a wonderful job describing a feel everyone has at some point in there life over relationships. hahaah it actually made me think of an ex. hmm. very very nice work |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep, I know how it is |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I enjoyed this, and smiled at themute's reply. I'm sorry for your pain. - Owl |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you all. I really do love the responses in PiP. When I am upset, I throw words on my computer screen rather than dishes. I was a bit angry when I wrote this, but we have recovered nicely. aziza |
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zaz Junior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 26 |
Love hurts, well described. |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
I love the way you hurl your words at the screen, zi .. perhaps I should do that more, intead of the dishes .. *looks at her near empty cabinets and sighs* ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well theres only one thing left to do...acceptance...James |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Yep, truer words could not be spoken. Thank you all who replied. Every word means a great deal to me. aziza |
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deasomnians Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 87California |
I think denial is necessary. Though it doesn't make the pain go away, it often puts it off until you are ready to handle it. I'm right there with you at this point. "Nature has implanted in our minds an insatiable longing to seek the truth" - CJCL Convention Theme 2005 |
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Potatobunny Junior Member
since 2006-07-17
Posts 14 |
That's an awesome poem and I have read it over and over but I can't find anything wrong with it that I should comment on. Keep up the good writing. -Potatobunny |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes denial is but a bandaid... and we are the only ones who know when to rip it off. Well done! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you. You made me smile. |
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