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scorpio
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0 posted 2006-07-15 02:25 PM




Reflective Corridor (Tanka)

Pausing at the door
She searches for direction.
Which path should she choose?
One with loving memories.
A reflective corridor.

believe in what your heart feels...

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iliana
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1 posted 2006-07-15 03:05 PM


Perfecto!  Very smooth one, too!  *hugs*....jo
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2006-07-15 03:08 PM


scorpio
Well done enjoyed.

scorpio
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3 posted 2006-07-15 05:48 PM


Thank you Iliana.  Your comments are much appreciated.

Sy thank you.  I appreciate your kind support.

Enchantress
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4 posted 2006-07-15 07:28 PM


Most excellent Scorpio.
It's been awhile since you have spilled your ink on these blue pages.
Interesting write indeed..
to take the familiar path of loving 'memories'
or a new path?
A path of new and exciting memory making moments.
Sometimes it is most difficult, frightening, to take the path less tried and true.

Well done Scorpio!

~Hugs & Smiles & Luv, Tinker~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

scorpio
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5 posted 2006-07-15 07:35 PM


Thank you Tinker for your insightful comments.  I am always grateful for your kind support and encouragement.

believe in what your heart feels...

Rick
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6 posted 2006-07-15 07:57 PM


Path of reflective memories, just beautiful, but sometimes the path which leads to memories to come brings us to our dreams.
Really enjoyed this scorpio, thank you for sharing.

Sincerely
Rick

scorpio
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7 posted 2006-07-15 08:35 PM


Thank you Rick.  Dreams can foretell the future. The corridor of dreams...
Enchantress
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8 posted 2006-07-16 09:05 AM


~Just because, this made me think~

scorpio
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9 posted 2006-07-16 09:06 AM


Thank you Tinker.  I like the way you think.

believe in what your heart feels...

divine chaos
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10 posted 2006-07-16 12:37 PM


so few words
to elicit so
may thoughts

wonderful!

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

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11 posted 2006-07-16 02:34 PM



This reminds me of the first time
I walked into a dream...

beautiful!

Thank you!


scorpio
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12 posted 2006-07-16 04:24 PM


Thank you Devine Chaos for your generous support.

Sunshine thank you very much.  I value your comments.

believe in what your heart feels...

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