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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2006-07-15 09:13 AM

because ...

the dance
belongs
wordless,
lost,
in the blue
waters
the source
of captive voids
fragile oceans
beneath
touching
storms,
cold midnights
pouring
around
stars
whispering
velvet
skies ...

flowing

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-07-15 09:15 AM

This reads like a gently flowing waltz Craig.
Well done.
Hugs

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

2 posted 2006-07-15 11:17 AM

Your poem leaves me wordless. It is so soothing and beautiful.

aziza

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2006-07-15 11:19 AM

To know this, is to know the depths of beauty.
TD

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

4 posted 2006-07-15 01:55 PM

Beautiful write!

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2006-07-15 05:56 PM

good read

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2006-07-17 07:26 AM

feels like rain
i like it
i like it

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

7 posted 2006-07-17 10:09 AM

"cold midnights
pouring
around
stars
whispering
velvet
skies ..."

Wonderful way of making us see AND feel the night. Beautifully written.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2006-07-17 12:55 PM

because ...

the dance
belongs
wordless,
lost,
in the blue
waters
the source
of captive voids
fragile oceans
beneath
touching
storms''''

~~~
just as it should be...

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

deasomnians
Member

since 2006-06-20

Posts 87
California

9 posted 2006-07-17 02:05 PM

beautiful and intriguing

"Nature has implanted in our minds an insatiable longing to seek the truth" - CJCL Convention Theme 2005

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

10 posted 2006-07-17 05:33 PM

Oooo I liked

-Tara

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