Open Poetry #38 |
Chaotic Prime |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chaotic Prime Chaotic grime, infinite prime Forever flowers, infinite time Evermore is the changing store Infinite seeds of echo’s core Each moment is a pixel dot To stay the screen and show the plot Ever is a fickle flower But a pixel in its power Eternity a figure eight That starts and ends in it’s create And sublimate is mist of flow Of all the points that come and go Horizons are the titillate The come and go forever’s state And echoes are the stars at night That burst each moment into light I wave to all before my bye And bow to all the future fry |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
I am having such a love affair with your pennings, 'tis wonderful ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
morning Sy great to see you! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I love this. Thank you. aziza |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
All your fry, whether large of small fill the avenues of these blue halls they come to read your every word, to carry with them greatness heard. Can one ever be so wonder-wise smiling with enchanting blue eyes we draw a bee-line straight to you, and hold each poem as morning dew... because you dew it so well! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
divine chaos Enjoyed your comment, thank you. passing Even better to see you. aziza Thank you so much for the read and reply. Sunshine Thank you sweety, love you too. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Once again we are graced with your beautiful poetry. Thank you for sharing with us. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm late again Sy...it seems to be coming a habit with me. But, alas I am here now to enjoy your fantastic pennings. And this one is no exception. Wonderful indeed. Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Thank you love you are kind. Nancy It doesn't matter early or late I love your replies. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
caught are all those fancy thoughts, a universe lives on pixel dots... and Ever blossoms in an hour I try to pick one fickle flower flickered in an instant's clime eternity's short in TV time LOL Karen |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i like the peek a boo feel to your words tag......you're it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Now I'll have to tag another world. LOL Klassy Lassy I like the way your mind works. Thank you sweet. |
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zaz Junior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 26 |
enjoyed this touch and go poem |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Very expressive. Enjoyed! Thanks, Kristabell "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
zaz Glad you enjoyed, thank you. Kristabell Thank you for the comment. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This makes too much sense to be chaos. *G* But you are prime, my friend... indeed. *S* I like this very much... thanks for the smiles! *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Horizons are the titillate The come and go forever’s state And echoes are the stars at night That burst each moment into light I wave to all before my bye And bow to all the future fry tantilizing dear poet... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you for the charming answer. LeeJ Thank you deaar poet. |
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