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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-07-13 08:30 AM


Chaotic Prime

Chaotic grime, infinite prime
Forever flowers, infinite time
Evermore is the changing store
Infinite seeds of echo’s core

Each moment is a pixel dot
To stay the screen and show the plot
Ever is a fickle flower
But a pixel in its power

Eternity a figure eight
That starts and ends in it’s create
And sublimate is mist of flow
Of all the points that come and go

Horizons are the titillate
The come and go forever’s state
And echoes are the stars at night
That burst each moment into light

I wave to all before my bye
And bow to all the future fry


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divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon
1 posted 2006-07-13 08:33 AM


I am having such a love affair with your pennings, 'tis wonderful

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

passing shadows
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2 posted 2006-07-13 09:32 AM


morning Sy

great to see you!

aziza
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3 posted 2006-07-13 10:08 AM


I love this.
Thank you.

aziza

Sunshine
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4 posted 2006-07-13 07:16 PM



All your fry, whether large of small
fill the avenues of these blue halls
they come to read your every word,
to carry with them greatness heard.

Can one ever be so wonder-wise
smiling with enchanting blue eyes
we draw a bee-line straight to you,
and hold each poem as morning dew...

because you dew it so well!








Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2006-07-13 07:46 PM


divine chaos
Enjoyed your comment, thank you.

passing  
Even better to see you.

aziza
Thank you so much for the read and reply.

Sunshine
Thank you sweety, love you too.

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
6 posted 2006-07-13 08:07 PM


Once again we are graced with your beautiful poetry. Thank you for sharing with us.
Enchantress
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7 posted 2006-07-13 08:12 PM


I'm late again Sy...it seems to be coming a habit with me.
But, alas I am here now to enjoy your fantastic pennings.
And this one is no exception.
Wonderful indeed.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2006-07-13 09:25 PM


SmartChick
Thank you love you are kind.

Nancy
It doesn't matter early or late I love your
replies.

Klassy Lassy
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9 posted 2006-07-13 09:51 PM


caught are all those fancy thoughts,
a universe lives on pixel dots...

and Ever blossoms in an hour
I try to pick one fickle flower

flickered in an instant's clime
eternity's short in TV time  


LOL  Karen



inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2006-07-13 10:44 PM


i like the peek a boo feel to your words


tag......you're it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2006-07-13 11:18 PM


inkedgoddess
Now I'll have to tag another world. LOL

Klassy Lassy
I like the way your mind works. Thank you
sweet.

zaz
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12 posted 2006-07-14 11:21 PM


enjoyed this touch and go poem
Kristabell
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13 posted 2006-07-14 11:34 PM


Very expressive. Enjoyed!

Thanks,
Kristabell

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2006-07-15 11:05 AM


zaz
Glad you enjoyed, thank you.

Kristabell
Thank you for the comment.

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15 posted 2006-07-18 09:47 AM


This makes too much sense to be chaos. *G* But you are prime, my friend... indeed. *S* I like this very much... thanks for the smiles! *S*
LeeJ
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16 posted 2006-07-18 09:52 AM


Horizons are the titillate
The come and go forever’s state
And echoes are the stars at night
That burst each moment into light

I wave to all before my bye
And bow to all the future fry




tantilizing dear poet...

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2006-07-18 10:12 AM


suthern
Thank you for the charming answer.

LeeJ
Thank you deaar poet.

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