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Open Poetry #38

Grant this moment

zaz
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 26

0 posted 2006-07-12 08:19 PM

God grant this moment I share with you,
Make it forever, blessed and true.
Give me the strength to give what I know,
As I ride the tide and go with the flow.

Let peace guide this world into a realm of bliss,
Sealed home forever in love with a kiss.
Shared as a gift given for free,
Surf up to heaven from the waves of the sea.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-07-12 08:58 PM

Zaz...

such a quiet prayer...

thank you.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2006-07-12 09:52 PM

Amen

divine chaos
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since 2006-07-09

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dancing 'neath the moon

3 posted 2006-07-12 10:06 PM

beautifully heartfelt words, zaz
thank you for sharing this

~*Sheli*~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2006-07-12 10:08 PM

A very beautiful and delicate prayer, very
nicely said.

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

5 posted 2006-07-12 10:09 PM

Nice write. Very sweet in its simplicity.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

6 posted 2006-07-12 10:13 PM

As beautiful as a whispered prayer~
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

luminosity
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since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

7 posted 2006-07-13 09:56 AM

oh I like, very much, though I write free style, as rhyme is hard for me, this flows beautifully off the heart and tongue

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

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8 posted 2006-07-13 11:02 AM

Very beautiful, zaz.

Thank you.
aziza

zaz
Junior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 26

9 posted 2006-07-13 01:08 PM

Thanks all, for such kind response on this.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

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Michigan, USA

10 posted 2006-07-13 06:22 PM

With arms wide open.

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