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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-07-12 12:47 PM


Gnarled hands wrap the wire tightly
around the silvered fence post that lists to the left
Fingers are impervious to sharp barbs
as if insults of old have prepared him
for the pain of lost years and forgotten dreams

aziza

© Copyright 2006 Alison - All Rights Reserved
OwlSA
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1 posted 2006-07-12 01:43 AM


Exquisite blend of the outward and inward image, aziza.  Much enjoyed.  Thank you.  

- Owl

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
2 posted 2006-07-12 01:45 AM


Thank you.
I am having so much fun in here.

divine chaos
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3 posted 2006-07-12 07:47 AM


*grins* more more more!

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

DejaEntendu
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4 posted 2006-07-12 07:55 AM


This is really, really good. Best one I've read lately. Well done.
aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
5 posted 2006-07-12 10:43 AM


:: Just grins silently ::

Thank you.

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