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...Lady Moon...
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...Lady Moon... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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.  . Peeking from her room, parting thin white cloud-curtains, Lady Moon smiling. Even the moon lies ~ on her back, rolling over to stare into space The moon, an artist paints a white path on the sea ~ for three curved dolphins. Deep blue indigo ~ the moon moulds the ocean's moods, determines its pulse. . |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh but yes it does, doesn't it? So many things that shining orb gives us. and so many words that have been written of it as well...You have practiced many hours to become as adept as you are... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I love that the moon lies on her back to stare into space. What an image -- if the moon daydreams? Thank you for making me smile and imagine ... aziza |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
And what a "spooning" moon this full one is. Well written!! Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow@ This is just beautiful, Nancy. Both, the picture and the poem. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, yes, she does shine brightly down does she not?  Lovely Teed. Miss ya lots! Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Nancy... you, and the Moon... are surely in sync... quite the pleasurable read! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Deep blue indigo ~ the moon moulds the ocean's moods, determines its pulse." Simply extravagant. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, what a gorgeous picture to match the poetry. I love that color! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 Lovely! and a  |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
Given a certain friendship with a lass in British Columbia, you will always get my attention with a moon poem and my heart was sure moved to the pulse of this one a poet who cares |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
enjoyed-it very much-very imaginative arthur |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady E...you do moon nice!! enjoyed this |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
outstanding!! |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
I coulda sworn I commented on this one already, but apparently my mind went out for donuts to go with the quart of milk that my muse went out for. This is absolutely lovely, the vision of the moon lying on her back, stargazing .. mmm perfect! ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Tinker this is full of wonderful images. I truly enjoy the way you are inspired by the beauty of our natural surroundings. Wonderful write!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
your words make a full moon even more wonderful - you write it very well Nancy - Paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~Thank you all so much for your great replies! hope everyone took the time to enjoy July's full moon~ |
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ambivalence Junior Member
since 2006-07-13
Posts 15Canada |
Natural, with a hint of darkness, very nice. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Picturesque....I loved your words, Nancy.  sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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