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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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Leftovers So good to see you again... nice weather we're having lately... please stand at least three feet back, I would appreciate it greatly. It's good to see you're vertical and all with you is fine and good, same here since I don't depend on you and realized I never could. I applaud your grand entrance, a stately presence is known, you should grace someone else though because I'd rather be alone. Oh my, look at the time... I've so many things to do... you really should be going on to the plenty who want so much of you because I'm sick of leftovers. |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
bravo!! I'm loving your writing  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Oh my, look at the time... I've so many things to do... you really should be going on to the plenty who want so much of you because I'm sick of leftovers. AMEN!!!!!!!!! |
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deasomnians Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 87California |
I love the line "you should grace someone else though" The irony in this poem is somehow subtly blatant. Well done! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Fantastic! You go, my friend. Stand your ground. You know I am behind you 100%. Hang onto all tht strength, real tight. and, anytime you need moral support, I will be there. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I do love your style....wham bam, here's a slam!!! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Artfully written, Dixie...good job. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"So good to see you again... nice weather we're having lately... please stand at least three feet back, I would appreciate it greatly" Oh boy! Oh boy!  I love it!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Love the " keep your distance , stay at arms length , bravo dixie this shows your strength Hope |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Slam, bam, dunk.   |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks so much to each of you for taking the time to leave a comment I enjoy them |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
WOW!!!! I know this one was written for me... Thanx MISS DIXIE. I really felt this one and enjoyed as i always do reading your work |
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