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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Blinded by the outer shell hearing only the cracking of the driven, searching for the piece that fits the puzzle reasoning always getting in the way begrudging tomorrow's tests hiding behind the naiveness wishing away the pain of trying in this broken world that weighs down with the possibility of failure... life can be so tiring~~ M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
 your not allowed any breaking down here girl...   a sad but well stated poem... |
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deasomnians Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 87California |
"hiding behind the naiveness" always seems safer until reality pokes through I agree: sad but true. Well-written as well. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey Lee, just got the syllabus for the course I take next week to get re certified in teaching and it is a bit overwhelming plus the books aren't in yet and I wanted to read ahead of time to prepare myself after years of not being in any formal educational class... you know it's that fear that rises that tells me I might not succeed...and then what??? sighing~~ M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Maureen, my friend, you are a winner in my book. And, always will be. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
well ya just gotta get it up pick it up and kick the stress it brings out the door Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
failure yeah...there's always a possibility for sure but hey, what's life without risk? |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
without the risk of failure there'd be no joy when we succeed *smiles* ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Sheli..I just wrote about that this morning~~  M |
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