Open Poetry #38 |
Hobbling |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hobbling I’ve hobbled me some weighty stones About my flesh and fragile bones To free my spirit of access Those phantoms that have caused duress The jumping of my state of mind The breaking starts to sate and find Causing me a minds disdain Filling me with strain and pain It seems I seek the Golden Fleece The golden path to true of peace Something that will clean the core And strip me of the beast of awe I’ve bailed illusions fantasy And sailed a life of argosy I’ve worn away my age of prime On teeter boards of passing time I’ve even searched Pandora’s Box But all I found was paradox |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
morning Sy precious write for my coffee |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, A precious reply for my ego. LOL |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
"I’ve even searched Pandora’s Box But all I found was paradox" smile... it's just like that! Still... I'll keep searching for the treasure... it's there!!! Neeraja |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I’ve even searched Pandora’s Box But all I found was paradox ********************* to find is to unwrap to unwrap is to live ************************ blessed sunday to you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Neeraja, I'm sure it is. Thank you inkedgoddess Love your reply. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Seymour...Your strength shines brightly through this peom. Enjoyed very much...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thoughtful poem, Sir. I love the paradox of Pandora's Box. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paul, You are a true friend. Lady, Thank you my dear. LOL perhaps there is another Pandora's box? |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"I’ve worn away my age of prime On teeter boards of passing time" Amen brother! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icebox Thank you brother. |
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Liz Sinclair Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 93Atlantis |
Pandora's Box...a contradiction of terms, heh? I like this diddy, nice rhythmic motion. Thanks for sharing. Liz...Carpe Diem
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Liz Sinclair Appreciate your read and reply. |
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