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silks of sanshi |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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mistress of a fawning wind what strums thy whisper synodic fair gossamer in gouache shimmer who dares my hands to lift to hem the sins of your panting revelry or to bend your willows fallow below the seam speak of horizons that adulate the worsening fragility and venerate a worshiper's lying sky that wear the guyver's tongue to puncture your solitary adornment with gentle ends of sermon silver serpentine in serrated meanderings ______________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A beautiful morning's horizon... thank you for your eyes. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
love the woven fabric of your words...excellent |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
show off....  just kidding...this is beautiful  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your illustrious pen is a creative extension of your fertile mind...   EA |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"who dares my hands to lift to hem the sins of your panting revelry or to bend your willows fallow" Haunts me. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love that serpentine imagery, the way your words wrapped themselves around me. |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
I love peeking in here and reading you.... |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Beautiful write! I think I will keep this one... Kristabell "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed....James |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
always a pleasure My spirit will rise |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
your diction and vocabulary surpass most ive heard, makes me want to start reading the dictionary. thanks for making me want one more thing  sheesh I am the two-toed wanderer |
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