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We Lay, We Lie, Together
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We Lay, We Lie, Together |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon 
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On sheets still fresh from washing hung in summer sun to dry moonlight glimpsing through a window open to the sky We lay, we lie, together, in the moonlight, you and I Our limbs, they are entangled In a sweet lover's embrace Familiar lines of muscle and spine Deftly dancing digits trace We lay, we lie together, heart to heart and face to face Our souls, they sing as one now In love's own perfect key My heart pens the lyrics While yours thrums the melody We lay, we lie, together in perfect harmony |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Glad to see a new person here. Welcome to PIP! I like this poem and hope to see more of yours. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You know I am your groupie - your # 1 fan (not frond type) and I love this poem. Thank you for turning me on to this site. It is wonderful. aziza |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautifully heat to heart attuned Hope |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sweetly chaotic ~ yet divinely harmonic! A loverly piece of poetically passionate writing!  EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
much enjoyed this! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sheli~ I adore the loving sounds of this one~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
This Touched me in the area of my heart. I see you understand how souls unite when love is there. Very good poem that shows wisdom. Hugs Kimberly  |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
aww thanks much for all your wonderful comments -- I have no idea where this poem came from. Well I -know- where it came from, but that's not even on the same side of the emotional rainbow as the original ending. I write my poems backwards, always think of the ending lines first, then have to find the middles and beginnings. Think that's the first I've actually done beginning to end, all in order and stuff Apparently, after the mass exodus of my muses several months ago, one of them found her way back last night *grins* ~*Sheli*~ |
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