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Catrina
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since 2004-11-10

Posts 132

0 posted 2006-08-09 08:09 PM

And Wednesday snuck in, sliding joyfully
over the hump even as last
Saturday night dreams were
still lingering in
Sunday’s dawn…

Wednesday didn’t mind that my mind
was still tangled in sleepovers of
the needful kind
and scents came again to remind me
of sand, and sea,

nor did she care that you cared enough
to send the very best,
even
if on Wednesday…

you never wanted to hold back
for an occasional special moment, no ~
so you snuck a slip-song in, made me laugh,
even jiggling a giggle a little,
and then more.

You reminded me of words
especially said for especial moods
coloring my eyes until they
cried hello…

and then promised no goodbyes.

With a grin, you declared
amigo sounds
and chuckled through dawn.

Yes, you do know me.

[This message has been edited by Catrina (08-09-2006 09:14 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-08-09 08:48 PM

coloring my eyes until they
cried hello…

loved those lines but enjoyed it all~~

nice work
M

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2006-08-09 10:19 PM

Catrina,

I enjoyed your colorful wording and spark. A pleasure to read your poetry and welcome you to the Blue Pages! Enjoy!

misc

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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3 posted 2006-08-09 10:48 PM

Catrina....Such does not come along very often....I love hearing its love song!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2006-08-10 07:23 AM

ms kitty..it seems something swirled the cake mix? enjoyed this pen ms

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

5 posted 2006-08-10 03:34 PM

"so you snuck a slip-song in, made me laugh,
even jiggling a giggle a little,
and then more."

~ That is what you have just done for me!

EA

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

6 posted 2006-08-10 03:54 PM

Oh, how neat! I like the whole tenor of this one, and the usage of language.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

divine chaos
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

7 posted 2006-08-10 04:52 PM

You reminded me of words
especially said for especial moods
coloring my eyes until they
cried hello…

and then promised no goodbyes.
******************************

I love these lines *smiles* perfection

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

8 posted 2006-08-10 05:36 PM

good read

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2006-08-10 05:50 PM

Well done.
I love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2006-08-10 06:14 PM

I've read this a few times now
and still don't know exactly what to say

but it's damn good!

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2006-08-11 02:32 PM

Absolutely beautiful! *S*

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

12 posted 2006-08-11 06:39 PM

"With a grin, you declared
amigo sounds
and chuckled through dawn.

Yes, you do know me."

Lovely feeling in this. .

Kristabell

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2006-08-11 07:15 PM

Enjoyed...James

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