Open Poetry #38 |
I Harbor A Madness |
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I harbor a madness that I can't explain a need to search darkness to walk in the rain for where there is dark there will soon be light and where there is rain there's a rainbow in sight I harbor a madness that keeps driving me on to find myself within myself before this life is gone and though I see no light no rainbow in the sky I may be lost forever but still, I'll always try and if the madness is still in me on the day that I die, I will remain here with other ghosts who have never said goodbye. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and though I see no light no rainbow in the sky I may be lost forever but still, I'll always try nicely done M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whoa, you've become quit the philosopher...this was beautiful, as yourself...enjoyed!!! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"and if the madness is still in me on the day that I die, I will remain here with other ghosts who have never said goodbye." LOVE THIS!! haahaa.... Me too. JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
"I harbor a madness that keeps driving me on to find myself within myself before this life is gone" Isn't the greater majority of the world searching themselves to some extent. Nice philosophical air about this poem. I like how it flowed with ease. |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
sigh...powerful write lady...I know this ache |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Dixie...Powerful write. You know I loved this one, it's a ...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is simple enough to believe that perhaps more of us should recognize our own madnesses... and be as honest as this poem. Well done, little one! |
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nedj Member
since 2006-06-23
Posts 87Oregon USA |
Madness is highly underrated. :-) A poem's just a poet in a word. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Much enjoyed this, Dixie! *hugs*....jo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Wow, Dixie. This is an impressive poem. Madness, indeed! I know exactly of which you speak. Patricia |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I once tried sanity for half an hour - and it drove me insane! I love your poem, Dixie. It is so healthy to know yourself well, and to know and understand your thoughts, as you do. That, I am sure, is one of the many reasons why you have survived and achieved so much and stayed such a great person - and, knowing you, grown as a result of the pain instead of letting things get you down for too long. - Owl |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
and if the madness is still in me on the day that I die, I will remain here with other ghosts who have never said goodbye. Hey Dixie , I will join you !!! Hope |
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Serena Junior Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 47 |
In todays world those that say that aren't mad, crazy, or purely insane ... are normally faking it anyway. You have to be a bit crazy to embrace the world these days, especially to embrace the amount of feelings and emotions that will constantly be a part of the human mind and psyche. The key is to never give up searching for the answers, because in the search for answers you will always find a better question to ask. Those that do not question anything (especially themsevles) are really just empty shells drifting from day to day waiting for someone to tell them the next move to make. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
I was going to say . . . but Serena just did it. Stay "mad", Dixie! It will keep you sane. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks to each of you I always enjoy the comments |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Dixie, what a wonderful title, I loved it and the poem attached, well done my friend. I am glad to habour a madness, it seems all that keeps me going though this life we have. The many voices of madness always speak, we chat, I write and that was just today. Good to see you here dear, be well and take care. Sincerely Rick |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I can understand this. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"and if the madness is still in me on the day that I die, I will remain here with other ghosts who have never said goodbye." We are all ghosts, Ma'am. *smile* |
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