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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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would you mind the simple stature either of you of just a tree between the rivers of your beginnings perhaps the middle man brother between limo sided lovers sistering their laughter at the edge of shuddering I would wonder at your eyes the pairs of them looking there at the mirrors of windows watching the other go places never traveled without dreams then saying it was time for turns following the leader under and down to somewhere no one returns from out of choice not necessity ___________________ daark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh boy, this one is the best of you I've ever read...  simply put...this turned my head, had me from the very first word and enraptured me to the very end...  Wonderful story and visuals... Hugs and good Morning  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bianca's choice... was to know the fluttering by... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms leej, thanks dear one for the eyes ________________ ms sun, flutterby anytime and thank you for the smile |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "to somewhere no one returns from out of choice not necessity" I can see the play and serious of this and those last lines, so fine!!  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
The currents of life sometimes carry us to places we would not choose on our own. Does a tree between beginnings give a place to catch our footings, and do the mirrored reflections record our tightening grasp as well as those who choose to let go... You have my eyes, this morning...tears, too. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, sweet neighbor, there is a seam between the family sides we meld, I dream there, thank you ____________________ ms KL, thank you for the smile and heart eyes |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for the butterfly sighs |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sigh... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky, thanks for sitting at the window and watching them with me ______________ lady ms, smile |
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