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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2006-07-05 04:12 PM



once again i lost one another
before we even meet why do i get
attactched so quickly to a mindless
voice without expressions?

maybe that wasnt my true intentions
but it came out that a way. maybe some
day ill remedy this and first start out
really super slow and maybe follow it up
with a kiss.

all and all i hope i am better some day
some way no one should have to deal with
a chronically ill girlfreind. Maybe someday
I'll be all well again and everything will
be as it once was back when i was 16 and things
were fine again.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2006-07-06 01:06 AM


"Maybe someday
I'll be all well again and everything will
be as it once was back when i was 16 and things were fine again."

Chilling write.
Excellent.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2006-07-06 07:39 PM


ty

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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